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  • Other Poetry Re: Two by Two

    Nice Rhyming. The problems I saw was that you didn't put periods at the ends of the sentences ,and this part doesn't really go together very good"They heard us into ...

    Sep 22, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Comparing Ocean and Land

    This is a Dyatome poem I just typed up. Ocean Wet,Blue Waving,Roaring,Crashing Deep,Salty,Sandy,Rocky Rolling,Shading,Grinding Hard,Rocky Land

    Sep 22, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Eden

    you were much better at describing than me. the only Problem I saw was that when you wrote "neighbours" you spelled it wrong. The right way to spell it is ...

    Sep 20, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Computer Problems

    You were very detailed. You described everything much better than I could. You had good grammar. The only problems I saw was "your command console will began to play" instead ...

    Sep 20, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Am I a good writer? Something I typed up....

    You described everything very well. I didn't notice any thing wrong in your grammar except it looked like some times it looks like you didn't double space after your periods ...

    Sep 20, 2009
  • Questions and Answers Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)

    I have posted 3 reports. Every time I try to write a story it says I have to write it twice.

    Sep 20, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Amazing Books

    The Unfortunate Series of Events is a good set of books too.

    Sep 20, 2009
  • General Articles Re: What is God?

    Not many people can provide an explanation to that question as good as you did. The only problem I saw was that when you wrote "Here is an example of ...

    Sep 20, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Soccer

    Soccer The oldest soccer like game was called Tsu-chu and was made by the Chinese people. In this game they had two teams and tried to kick a leather ball ...

    Sep 18, 2009


In a world too often governed by corruption and arrogance, it can be difficult to stay true to one's literary and philosophical principles.
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